It is/was great that you don't say it is THE one or THIS miracle cure (be it dietary supplement, ointment, ...) but say it is a mix of everything and can help (at first), you also don't demonize exactly THIS or THAT! Great, it all sounds really credible!
Unfortunately, you talked a little too much for me personally. The examples are good and important, but keep them shorter. Maybe less "I did this and tried this and this and this and this and this and ... (a thousand times more "confirming" what everything was) or Jacob had done this and this and had this and had this and ... tried a, b, c, d, e, f, ... - you had already done or had all sorts of things or Jacob had somehow summarized all this in one or two words would be enough in my opinion. That would have shortened the evening and you would have been more attentive and longer and perhaps been able to remember the essentials better. Thank you.
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